Hi Akira-Lee, I am so proud of you. I love your story. I want to remind you that your name is important and needs a capital letter every time you write it. I really liked the way you described the rainbow as terrific and lovely. I would love it if you could read your story out loud to someone in your house and edit it to fix any typos that take away from your lovely message. Keep up the awesome writing. From Mrs Carruthers.
I like the word terrific Akira-Lee! Good girl for sharing your writing on your blog.
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thank you for help everyone
DeleteHi Akira-Lee, I am so proud of you. I love your story. I want to remind you that your name is important and needs a capital letter every time you write it. I really liked the way you described the rainbow as terrific and lovely. I would love it if you could read your story out loud to someone in your house and edit it to fix any typos that take away from your lovely message.
ReplyDeleteKeep up the awesome writing. From Mrs Carruthers.
thank you for being a great great and lovey teacher
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